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I do, I write poetry, Its a good way to get things out.


Hearts are broken.
But haven't spoken.
Silence only spirits hear.
And love is far from near.
Ive shed too many tears.
Kisses meant nothing after all that loving,
Between us two,
Now all that's left is Me not you,
To love.
To cherish.
To hold.
To kiss away the pain.
To mend this broken hearts pain.
Broken away by hate and lies,
And sorrow, and pain.
So now that ive lain down to rest,
I Close my eyes,Try not cry,
For everything will be alright.
Tell the world goodnight,
Tell the nightmare goodbye...



Hearts of Glass.

An innocent heart as clear as Glass, pure and whole,

Sweet and true,

Love moves in and works its spell, glittering, glistening,

The touch , the smell,

A feeling of joy, pleasure and bliss, oh how did i ever live

Without this,

The world looks beautiful, honest and True,

The tinted colours are all sweet and new,

But then one day the magic stops, the windows turn black ,

the glitter to dust,

The pure clear heart of Glass gets turned in turmoil,

Thrown about carelessly, falls ,and is broken,

All in pieces smashed up inside, and then there is no place to hide.

You cry and dissmay , will this pain go away?

you feel as though life is ending, or no need to go on,

But you must not give in, you must be strong.

A heart made of Glass got broken its true, some how one day,

Some other heart will fix you.

xxx

2007-09-15 08:08:05 · 26 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music Polls & Surveys

26 answers

These are some of my feelings,

A writer’s block
By Cid Vain:

The gears deep inside my head have seemingly ceased to function. I have no serious intimation of purpose and existence and I know I betray and dishearten my Ggod my alterer and my superlative muse. I know now that I’ am a singular cosmonaut, a matter full of substance in this multiverse. My ontology purifies per se constantly and appropriately without hesitation and prejudice propensity. Yet all this I seem to compromise, for what I query absolutely every day. Love, whether agape, supreme philia, and of non-living continuation, similar to the gravitational relation of all element known and unknown. I miss and yearn for such knowledge and empyreal influence; I know I will not survive for long in this ostensible time, here in this vain and trivial subsistence the living considers as nothing and everything. So it seems that this multivariable darkness is my scotopic luminosity, thus the light at hand blocks my literal vision as any innate and glowing after image of the senses, which renders one who ogles for an overly duration in there perceptible life. And I find myself again here amidst vain just wasting away, blocking myself from story bound pleasures and lexicographical freedom.

2007-09-15 08:49:17 · answer #1 · answered by cidvain74 1 · 2 0

Wow! Most of the time when people post stuff they've written here, it's godawful, but you're really good! ^_^ &hearts

I've been writing songs since I was 11. If I didn't have songwriting as an outlet, I'd loose my mind. ^_^

2007-09-15 15:20:31 · answer #2 · answered by Mr. Thorax 6 · 1 0

I love poetry I also write a lot of stuff.I think of it as a way of expressing myself

2007-09-15 15:15:03 · answer #3 · answered by ♕ℭrown ƒit me good♕ 6 · 0 0

I like your poem very much.You truly have talent, The way you express emotional tones, within your beautiful words. Is just brilliant.Thank you for sharing.

2007-09-15 16:03:37 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

Thats excellent

2007-09-15 15:28:25 · answer #5 · answered by Hahaha! 4 · 0 0

Very nicely done. But does it really help with it? It can't make it go away. Do you put the walls back up for awhile until you heal?

2007-09-15 15:14:12 · answer #6 · answered by Dorkboy 7 · 0 1

WOW u deserve 1000 stars!!!! I'm giving u 1

2007-09-15 15:21:19 · answer #7 · answered by ? 4 · 0 0

love heals broken heart

2007-09-15 16:43:47 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

It has to be someone very special in order for me to express my deepest feelings because then i'm leaving myself wide open and vulnerable then that leaves me feeling naked, so i'm careful when putting it all in words.

2007-09-15 15:23:57 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 2 0

wow. those are REALLY good!!!

i also use poetry to express feelings.. but mine can't compare to yours.

i also incorporate my feelings into creative stories. Just for fun.

2007-09-15 15:15:18 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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