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Well okay, there are a series of characters

okay, it starts out like this,

a father is going crazy, hes screaming and yelling and abusing his wife, he asks her quuestions, and then, he angers him some much, he hits her and then kills her, about a 12 year old girl or boy runs over to her to find shes dead and yells back at him, that he kiiled her, the man tries to shut her up by beating her down but she discovers her powers


what do you think?

should it be a boy, or a girl

and how should it start out, I want it to be silent, then BAM, the violence starts, were should the setting be?

any suggestions?

2007-09-15 06:59:02 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music Comics & Animation

4 answers

Something like that is more bound to happen right here, in the USA...so make that the setting. I think you should start the book out...as if someone is walking or biking through a quiet neighborhood in the afternoon...the weather is nice..then they approach a loud household. sound effects near the door....and the kid stops on his bike..just gazing at the house....then it goes into the inside...and you see the dialogue with shadows on the wall....you can continue from there

2007-09-15 07:09:01 · answer #1 · answered by Ari-kun 2 · 3 0

I agree with the other answers. I think if you made something like this there would be controversy. I know its fictional. But theres plenty of groups that would say it advocates violence against women and children.

2007-09-15 11:09:15 · answer #2 · answered by samurai_fairy 5 · 1 0

I dunno, I'm just so tired of all the violent sick stuff, there's so much of it around.

I'd rather see adventure or time travel instead, not stuff that plays off emotions that come too close to real life. People with this in their families aren't looking to read more of it.

Sorry.

2007-09-15 07:09:00 · answer #3 · answered by Elaine M 7 · 2 0

Once upon a time, there was an anaconda ... in my pants.

2007-09-16 05:57:24 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

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