Story Name: Bad luck Can Be A Good Thing
Status: In-Progress
# of Chapters: 1
Rating: T+
Genre: Drama/Action/Adventure/Romance/General
Character(s): Dylan, Thomas, Joey, Jennifer,
Summery: Jennifer has a secret that she would rather no one know. Joey knows her secrets and wants to tell her 2 teamates. Now how is she going to deal with this? What is this secret? And why are Dylan and thomas being nice to her?
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2007-09-14 15:09:19 · 5 answers · asked by Ree Lynne 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
I'd buy it. There's just something so intriguing bout this.
2007-09-14 15:17:40 · answer #1 · answered by ♥Butt3rfLyKis5ez 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That's not enough information to base a story on. If you want my honest opinion, right now, it sounds very cliched.
Give me more information, and then maybe I'll change my mind.
2007-09-14 15:15:36 · answer #2 · answered by x_beforethedawn_x 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
You have no plot. All you have is a situation involving 4 characters. You need to do your character studies, outline and work on expanding this situation into a plot. This just isn't enough to build a story on. Pax-C
2007-09-14 15:21:51 · answer #3 · answered by Persiphone_Hellecat 7 · 1⤊ 2⤋
Sounds pretty good to me.
2007-09-14 15:15:31 · answer #4 · answered by The PENsive Insomniac 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
sounds kinda boring cuz we know nothing about the characters
2007-09-14 15:18:10 · answer #5 · answered by skaur1290 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋