My reality is this
I look at you and you take my breath away
I would ask for more time with you but I don’t
I love this moment we are together
Our standards of living is different
I would like us to be one and the same
I would love to be able to give you more , more of us in this moment
Our love is like a wild fire, it burns with passion,
Our love is more then a second hand emotion.
Our love is let go like ice that melts on cue.
But some how we manage to be happy,
I love these moments,
we save each other
open each others eyes to the reality that presents it self in front of us.
2007-09-14 11:05:23 · 6 answers · asked by ? 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
I really prefer poems that rhyme or have more of a melodic undertone however, i think this is beautiful, strong, and heartfelt......keep writing
2007-09-14 11:13:32 · answer #1 · answered by HisPrincess 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Listen to Ring Of Fire by Johnny Cash, it is portraying the same feeling. Love can be painfully good or bad.
2007-09-14 11:15:13 · answer #2 · answered by konroyb 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I have a really short attention span. Do I have to read the whole thing?
2007-09-14 11:10:29 · answer #3 · answered by two11ll 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Very Good !! Keept writting.
nfd♥
2007-09-14 12:45:21 · answer #4 · answered by fishineasy™ 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
apart from borrowing Tina Turner lyrics...
It's very original
M : )
2007-09-14 11:13:07 · answer #5 · answered by mesmerized 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
lonely huh
2007-09-14 11:14:01 · answer #6 · answered by fatcat 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋