The terrorists will try to find a vulnerable area where they can operate. Certainly a city like Chicago of Detroit with all their Muslim residents would be a likely place for terrorists to launch an attack. The next al qaeda attack may be on an American school, like the Chechnians attack on the school in Russia.
2007-09-13 10:08:55
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answered by Shane 7
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Before any thing I need to thank you for the invitation. I haven't read much of your works but I like this poem. It shows that you have been working on it for a while. Well done. I assume you want criticism by inviting me, so here are my suggestions: S1L7: If I were you I would change the word 'spiraling' with 'descending'. It matches the reality better. and I would change 'going up' with 'ascending'. S1L9: It is better to change this line with this (in my opinion of course): fathers hit the booze and their wives. My reason is this: because you are talking in general so you better use simple words and avoid the word 'the'. S1L11: What do you mean by subdue the world's people? If you mean to avoid people's effects on you then it is not a good line. Try to paraphrase it. S1L14: I think it is better to remove the word 'maybe'. Since you are concluding I suggest that you remove this word. S2L4: You better say 'pretending'. in this way this sentence also rhymes with the last one. S2L5: it is better to say 'government is going broken' or 'government is broken'. Don't use 'the'. S2L14: I think you forgot to use 'is' before the phrase 'to teach'. S2L16: It is better to say: reality is what no one can understand or handle. S3L5: This line really needs to be paraphrased. time of your verbs don't match. S3L8: 'tortured' not 'torture'. S3L15: You should say 'live in peace' not 'live is peace'. or maybe you mean 'life is peace'??? Alright, this poem was so long but it was worth reading. I have a friendly suggestion for you. I think you better try to shorten this poem a bit and focus more on your subject(s). While this poem is excellent, it still needs to be re-organized. Never stop writing. :)
2016-04-04 19:18:46
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answered by Anonymous
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I guess the Nafta Superhighway and they were going to put some super hub in Kansas or Missouri. Gee, the terrorists know more about what is going on in our country than we do. Hmmmmm.
Actually, I think the funds have more to do with how well the politicians are connected.
2007-09-13 10:04:31
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answered by Anonymous
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Last I checked the Midwest was part of the United States. if a terrorist set off a nuclear bomb there it would affect the entire country.
2007-09-13 09:58:48
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answered by davidmi711 7
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Good question. I'm from the East but I'm not that intelligent or cunning enough to think like masterminds but all I can say is your answer is in the movie.....Lord of War
2007-09-13 09:59:07
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answered by Anonymous
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Any place in the US is as equal as anyother place in the US. My life in Wichita, KS is worth the same as someone elses life in NYC.
2007-09-13 10:02:21
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answered by civil_av8r 7
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There's gold in them thar hills.
2007-09-13 10:02:04
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answered by omgridiculous 2
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the oil, otherwise it is a desert!!
2007-09-13 10:05:20
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answered by captain redbeard 4
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