It's called 'A SHORT HISTORY OF THE PRIMITIVE EARTH.'
It’s a little too long to post it in the allotted space Yahoo provides so I have provided a link to the poem posted in my Live Journal blog. It will take you about ten minutes to read it and only about a half a minute to decide to trash it or not.
http://unmired.livejournal.com/10957.html
If you are the type who enjoys letting your imagination run amok and relishes providing your own input then you will probably like reading this rather long narrative poem.
However, if you're the type who wants everything you read to be self-evident and simple I suggest you not bother even clicking on the link.
In either case, have fun.
2007-09-13 07:40:37 · 3 answers · asked by Doc Watson 7 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Oh, this is wonderful. Pure joy to read. I was engrossed from beginning to end. I loved the concept, the thoughts you placed in my mind, which spurred other thoughts. Please, do not trash this! I have an appetite to read more of your writings.
2007-09-13 10:47:44 · answer #1 · answered by Marguerite 7 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Trashing this poem is something that the third prototype would do. It defeats the purpose of the creative process. Interesting ideas in there.
2007-09-13 15:19:08 · answer #2 · answered by endlessbreeez 1 · 2⤊ 1⤋
It's not mindless since it made me really think and well I have a vivid imagination.
2007-09-13 14:47:27 · answer #3 · answered by ♆Şрhĩņxy - Lost In Time. 7 · 2⤊ 1⤋