What’s a Dream
What’s a dream when:
You can’t fathom its beauties.
What’s a dream when:
You are unknown.
Chasing this celestial world:
For my dream.
Chasing this eternal world:
For my love.
2007-09-12 15:52:09 · 7 answers · asked by Evangelist 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
awww. that's so sweet!
2007-09-12 15:54:23 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice Poem. I think you have talent, keep on writing. To answer your question "What's a Dream" I think Disney says it best, "A Dream is a Wish your Heart Makes". (Wink)
2007-09-12 16:03:18 · answer #2 · answered by outlook0330 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well i think it is garbauge. It sounds like you are a hopless, pathetic, unloved person. Get out of the mind frame that love is impossible to achieve, that you will never succeed, and how you need to give up.
God Bless and I will say a prayer for you
2007-09-12 16:03:11 · answer #3 · answered by Steve G 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Very cute n sweet keep up da gud wrk.
2007-09-12 19:13:02 · answer #4 · answered by Richa 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i dont think i will ever write my own poetry ....but good job man...keep doin what you love ure obviously good at it...
have a good day man
2007-09-12 15:56:06 · answer #5 · answered by Albert 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is good. i love the rythmn of the poem, is it written for some one? i really like it. if you have other poems, please send them to me through my yahoo IM. love your work!
2007-09-12 15:57:25 · answer #6 · answered by mrs.waltdisney928 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
AWW
2007-09-12 15:57:27 · answer #7 · answered by UGLYASSBITYCH 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋