You'll have to read it from this site that i'll give. I appreciate any feedback that you can post on this answers site!
http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1317768
2007-09-12 12:39:54 · 2 answers · asked by Happy. Finally. 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
It is an interesting poem. I like the overall flow of the words and the visual nature of your wording.
You seem to show some promise as a poet. I would continue to grow in this were I you. My forte is prose. Most of the poems I have written were intended to be funny. I don't think I could write a serious poem like yours.
Thank you for sharing it.
2007-09-12 12:50:56 · answer #1 · answered by Warren D 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Hi there! I enjoyed it. Honestly, if it were any longer, I would have became bored. Thanks for sharing your poem, and not being a hoard! LOL! I am the one who sucks at rhyming!! ;) Take care! Good luck, always think positive and strive to move forward.
2007-09-12 19:49:48 · answer #2 · answered by ~Kim~ 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋