i sit under a tree
and think what it means to be me
i stand on the shore
and wonder what it's for
i lay under the sky
and wonder where i'll die
I run and jump and strive
so I can say that I'm alive!
2007-09-12 10:56:23 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
omg that is so sad. but simple.
2007-09-12 11:02:40 · answer #1 · answered by Rosalie 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like you poem very much. it show the complexity of human thought and emotion that often we think about as we go about our daily lives
2007-09-12 18:03:44 · answer #2 · answered by dustin f 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yes I love it but you might need to copy right it so people will not steal it and make money off of it!!!!!!!!!
2007-09-12 18:02:57 · answer #3 · answered by tdixon100 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
yes, I like it a lot. It is a little naive, but also a little sad.
2007-09-12 18:03:55 · answer #4 · answered by Jeff C 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
The rhyming is hackneyed, but other than that it's not bad.
2007-09-13 23:24:36 · answer #5 · answered by rachy1337 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats a great poem.. keep up the good work..
2007-09-12 18:04:15 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Good work.
2007-09-14 07:05:05 · answer #7 · answered by Richa 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
simple and clean
2007-09-16 01:49:48 · answer #8 · answered by Xiana 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it!
2007-09-13 01:08:44 · answer #9 · answered by DeborahDel 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its great. so great that it made me getting totally wasted.
2007-09-12 18:07:21 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋