Like the reflection of the moon
In a crystal clear lake,
Your voice comes to me,
As I start to wake.
My dream was disturbed.
No longer do I sleep,
Your image is gone I start to weep.
With the rain on the roof,
And the sun in the sky,
The nights are so long,
And the days pass me by.
2007-09-11 23:04:12 · 7 answers · asked by Cinderelly 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Cinderally; this is a great poem and i loved it a lot.Thanks for sharing with us; it is a big 10 for sure....Shelly
2007-09-12 05:45:56 · answer #1 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a 10 i like the short ones
2007-09-12 04:11:08 · answer #2 · answered by narlyknot 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10.
2007-09-11 23:08:25 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
whether it does not rhyme x) o.k. spoken,, or extremely written, or extremely typed, or ether or all of those 18 out of 20 reason i did no longer sense like your paintings telling you your paintings is in all danger a 20/20 reason i did no longer sense like reading the full factor yet i marked it as exciting
2016-10-04 10:34:41 · answer #4 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like
2007-09-11 23:09:48 · answer #5 · answered by Normefoo 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's exactly how I feel.
2007-09-12 18:13:38 · answer #6 · answered by DeborahDel 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very good, I like it. Simple message, heartfelt poem, thanks for sharing.
exit dondi, stage right
2007-09-11 23:13:04 · answer #7 · answered by Dondi 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋