if i had weighed my pen
wrote this then
did you see the cross
or was this a toss
2007-09-11 16:24:19 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
it sounds like an unfinished couplet...maybe if u add up more lines it'll make more sense..hv fun writing!!!
2007-09-11 18:08:01 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I give it a 2, maybe 3
2007-09-11 16:29:00 · answer #2 · answered by nanlwart 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It didn't make sense and it was just a bunch of rhyming lines.
-3 / 5
2007-09-12 16:17:37 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
This wasn't a poem, was it?
I think it's not finished.
2007-09-11 16:31:47 · answer #4 · answered by The Babe is Armed! 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Short but it still requires speculation...
It is well written and doesn't require extra information...
Definatly a good poem.
2007-09-11 17:31:21 · answer #5 · answered by cursedtocry 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Yeah dude! I like your poem!!
2007-09-11 16:29:55 · answer #6 · answered by Killerfang 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋