One more short one. Comment if you like.?

Question

brain doesn't matter

I do not care what it is that you said,
How could I care, according to you I do not exist.
You dissed me and you plundered me,
You ripped my tiny soul apart.
Another time and another place,
I tried to rhyme, I did my best.
You told me to leave, just go away,
I do not think so, I think that I will stay.
Stay on to play for just one more day,
You can try to crush all of my dreams.
But I do not care not one little bit,
Does it really matter, when I do not even really exist?
Does it really mean anything at all?

Answer 1

This is really nice writing. You have a wonderful talent for this, and I think you should continue your writing. Your poem is visual and unique. I see this poem from the view of being about someone who refuses to stop living because of experiencing hurt from someone else. I could be wrong. It's something that could really change the way people approach life and love. Keep on writing, I believe in your potential. As a fellow writer, I appreciate the honesty and realism of your work. Great job!!

No matter what this is about, it was wonderful

Answer 2

Rebecca- uncertain i kinda like yet a lot of human beings are suggested as its recommendations-blowing- 8-10 Natasha- as quickly as fairly state-of-the-artwork now slightly chavy 6/10 TickieTockie- strange and kinda stupid 2/10 Rhianna- like it 10/10 Emily- like it however the Emeil Sandi spells it 9/10

Answer 3

disgruntled for being dissed for rhyming.. I like that. Have a star.



exit dondi stage left

Answer 4

I love this poem as it;s full of feeling and raw emotions..Nice work as always,another star for this one,,,Shelly

Answer 5

nice...but what is it about? writing poetry?