Letter To Editor?

Question

Can someone give me some pointers on this and correct any spelling/grammer mistakes please?

Dear Editor,

A few days ago I read a book by a certain little known author. Even though the plot wasn’t concise and there was no description I still enjoyed it immensely because this author was considerably good at creating their characters. I have read many books by many novelists and none of them conveyed such an in depth character like this one did. Most authors forget to mention the characters thoughts and feelings more often and express what is unique about them, this is what makes a character attractive and keeps the reader wanting more.
Now that I have said that I’d like to bring an issue that is very concerning to our society and it is that children do not use and enjoy literature as much as previous generations. They prefer to play electronic games and watch TV when they should be learning by reading. I think that if authors paid more attention to their characters and added quirky habits about them that a real child might have, that this would case children to read more. I believe that if writers were more educated in this subject we would see children continuously reading and perhaps even writing a piece of fiction themselves.
For more information please go to www.createacharacter.org.
I hope this raised awareness to any author so that they will generate more loved characters.
Thank you and goodbye

Answer 1

I don't think there is any mistakes.

Answer 2

Dear Editor,

A few days ago, I read a book by a little known author, )GIVE NAME ). Even though the plot was not concise and there was no description, I still enjoyed it immensely. The author was very good at describing and creating the characters in the book. I have read many books but none of them conveyed such in-depth character as this one. Most authors forget to mention the character's thoughts and feelings or express what is unique about them. These attributes make a character attractive and keeps the reader wanting more.
With that said, I’d like to bring forth an issue that is very concerning to our society and that is that children do not use and enjoy literature like previous generations. They prefer to play electronic games and watch TV when they should be further their education through reading. I believe if authors paid more attention to their characters and added quirky related habits that children might have, it would encourage children to read more. I believe if writers were more educated in this subject, we would see children continuously reading and perhaps even writing a piece of fiction themselves.

For more information please go to www.createacharacter.org.
I hope this raised awareness to any author so that they will generate more loved characters.
Thank you

Answer 3

Dear Sir/Madam,

Several days ago, I read a book by a not so well known author. The plot wasn't concise, but I enjoyed it immensely. This author was good at developing characters along with their thoughts and feelings.

With that said, I'd like to address an issue concerning our youth of today. My concern is that our children are not reading and enoying literature as the previous generations before them. Their preference has become the television, electronic games and various other high-tech devices. What is the solution to this problem? Authors would do well to add characters that draw the attention of the modern day child.

Granted, times have changed and so have the interests of the younger generation, however, if we want to win our children back into the world of literacy we do well to adapt to these changes.
It is my hope that this letter will raise the awareness of authors across the nation to take an active interest in writing stimulating works for our young ones.

Sincerely,

Answer 4

finish your statement with a space
like this

Thank you and Goodbye.