hey i wrote this poem.but im not lovestruck.im jus a kid.tell ur opinion about this poem
happy heart attack
you are the one,the only one
who makes me hot.
dont u know that im the only dudett
for you,and you only
i dont know who am i
as soon as you came into my world
i know only you in this world
as soon as i became unknown
so soon i died
and who is the murederer?
you and you only
and this is happy heart attack
2007-09-10 22:10:38 · 11 answers · asked by jeethu 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
ya its nice
simply i told
it is very beautiful
and meaningful
2007-09-11 00:00:10 · answer #1 · answered by rajesh r 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
2/5
2007-09-10 23:45:25 · answer #2 · answered by k1ngfischer 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a nice short poem. To avoid mixing tenses and meaning separate these two lines, one belongs to the preceding stanza the other to the succeeding stanza:
i know only you in this world
as soon as i became unknown
good luck in your efforts
2007-09-10 22:58:35 · answer #3 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its cute... i mean for a kid its good for you to made such very nice poem like this.,
its a nice hobby.,. gudluck
2007-09-10 22:26:22 · answer #4 · answered by tessa 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i answered this one in detail on the philosophy page. have you checked there?
2007-09-10 22:50:23 · answer #5 · answered by LK 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is a very sensible and meaningful poem
2007-09-10 23:45:02 · answer #6 · answered by ARUN M 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cutely funny
2007-09-10 22:40:10 · answer #7 · answered by gomsi 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
creative
2007-09-11 00:33:52 · answer #8 · answered by Richa 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its nice
2007-09-10 22:54:02 · answer #9 · answered by ah 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its good Bro.
Carry on........
2007-09-10 22:32:19 · answer #10 · answered by Abhishek 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋