And it hurt you way down deep
You wish for them all through the day
Maybe cry yourself to sleep
As life goes on and time goes by
You miss them more each day
Your memories turn to dreams at night
You wish the dreams could stay
2007-09-10 13:37:57 · 8 answers · asked by vitraux 6 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
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Deep, Heartfelt piece...thank you for sharing.
Peace and Love to all
R.R.B.
2007-09-10 19:12:23 · answer #1 · answered by RobinRedBear 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Let's see here, has this ever been the equation?
You truly love someone + They Leave= You throw a party
Missing a loved one, well that's always cause for shallow joy isn't it?
Well I don't know why you would possibly wish for someone all day just because you love and miss them, that one will keep me up for hours, but maybe it I start crying then I can sleep since that seems to be a solution in every cliched poem every written. "Cry yourself to sleep"
Make sure you alert me when life can go by without time tagging along.
Let's see, someone gone for one day as opposed to six years, which one do you miss more? I had no idea that you could miss someone more just because more time has gone by.
Memories turning into dreams seems like a sweet deal, when there are people facing insomnia and night terrors, why do you say it like it's a sad thing?
"You wish the dreams could stay" Well there is a solution for this problem, get a doctor to help you put yourself in a self-induced coma, then you can stay in dream-world forever and never really live.
2007-09-10 13:57:14 · answer #2 · answered by Devi 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
i might say "sunshower" its off of a soundtrack, in spite of the undeniable fact that it may be on i-tunes. that's off of the large expectancies soundtrack which might clarify why it suits what you're searching for.
2016-10-10 08:25:50 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is a lovely poem and it reminds me of my mom.She died and i miss her so much ;and think of her always.Yes i do have dreams with her and often wake up crying..Great poem ; thanks for shareing.,.,.,
2007-09-10 17:07:22 · answer #4 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
OMG yes...missing them right now :( That is very pretty!! Thank you for sharing!!
2007-09-10 13:46:38 · answer #5 · answered by lizzy_22_1999 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well i am not very forthcoming with compliments but it is definitely not the worst one I have read tonight but definitely not professional quality.
2007-09-10 16:42:39 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
i love that poem
thanks
and yes i did
A LOT
2007-09-10 13:45:57 · answer #7 · answered by YOU JUST LOST THE GAME(: 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
yes...now I feel sad :-( that was lovely
2007-09-10 14:07:47 · answer #8 · answered by Chelle B 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋