A Thrill
Riding on a rollercoaster
Eating something good
Seeing the man of your dreams
Tanning on a beach
Living on your own
Watching or being on TV
Flying on an airplane
Rocking the boat
Driving your dream car
Receiving positive feedback
Having freedom
Speaking a foreign language fluently
Having a lot of money
Doing what pleases you.
2007-09-09 14:17:17 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
There are many forms of poetry and poems...and yours fits the category of free-style poetry. It shows who you are and your dreams of the schemes in your life. Do you write others? Do these just roll off the tip of your head?? You have described all the thrills you have or wish to have in your life. Good Luck! ;)
2007-09-09 14:33:45 · answer #1 · answered by missellie 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
For me a poem has to have rhythm. It does not always must rhyme nevertheless it demands to hit my feelings. I suppose readability of expression is fundamental as good. I do not love to moment bet what I'm studying approximately. I constantly appear for what I time period "poetic gemstones"within the textual content.
2016-09-05 08:21:50 · answer #2 · answered by edge 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds more like a list than a poem...
2007-09-09 14:21:24 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
Thats very good
2007-09-09 14:50:16 · answer #4 · answered by donielle 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it. It's original :)
2007-09-09 14:31:42 · answer #5 · answered by Ohioguy95 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋