Mum
I wish there weren't so many miles between us,because i would love to spend more time with you.
Even though we're apart,I send my love and share my thoughts with you.
I am so proud to have you as my mother,
and as I remember your guidance from my childhood days until adulthood,
I not only recall the warm memories
we have shared,but the love we have always
had for one another and the need I have for you in my life.
Thank You for always being there when i need you,and for being the wonderful
Mother you are.............
2007-09-09 04:14:52 · 16 answers · asked by Anonymous in Social Science ➔ Psychology
You can sell it to a greeting card company for mother's day! The card would sell fast...I would be the first to buy it, except I am very much with my mom.
Nice sentiments.
Keep up the copy writing attempts.
2007-09-09 05:06:54 · answer #1 · answered by ECOTHINK 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great - except for the bit "and the need I have for you in my life". Presumably written by an adult, this sentence would perhaps unwittingly suggest an unhealthy relationship with the mother as an adult should really be capable of independently living, without the mother "needed". A successful mother is one who has done her job so that you can survive without her. Always being there when she is needed is nice though; it lies within the context of her still being accessible to you now and again, for guidance. I'm sure the receiving mother would be touched and feel happy to read this. Perhaps "...the love we have always had for each other, and I now value the confidence you have given me to be a good person within my own life. Thank you..."
2007-09-09 11:26:21 · answer #2 · answered by Gone Crazy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is very nice, I would feel proud to receive it from my son.
Great - except for the bit "and the need I have for you in my life". Presumably written by an adult, this sentence would perhaps unwittingly suggest an unhealthy relationship with the mother as an adult should really be capable of independently living, without the mother "needed". A successful mother is one who has done her job so that you can survive without her. Always being there when she is needed is nice though; it lies within the context of her still being accessible to you now and again, for guidance. I'm sure the receiving mother would be touched and feel happy to read this. Perhaps "...the love we have always had for each other, and I now value the confidence you have given me to be a good person within my own life. Thank you..."
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I like it very much, I'll read it to my mother too , thankx
hi Gu!t@r....
its really an awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee poem.....superb....i feel very lucky 4 those ppl who can read dis poem out 2 their mothers...az i m not dat lucky...az i don hav my mom......she left me behind wid my step mom...who iz az usual veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy bad....but i'll coney dis poem 2 her thru god...well watever awesome poem....gud job...tc...sweet dreamz...bye...
*****wHenEvEr ! f!nd kEy 2 $ucCe$$, $um1 ch@ngE$ dE LocK.....*****.
wonderful!!
it seems like u miss & love ur mother very much...
You can sell it to a greeting card company for mother's day! The card would sell fast...I would be the first to buy it, except I am very much with my mom.
Nice sentiments.
Keep up the copy writing attempts.
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HAPPY MOTHERS DAY.
MOM, U R UP THERE, WITH GOD,
I AM HERE, DOWN TO EARTH.
HAPPY MOTHERS DAY, DEAREST MOM.
Very nice.
great....good...very good.
I wish I were so eloquent.
That is really sweet !
I liked it... wish I could read it for my mom.... but... anyways...
Its true that...
Just because God could not be everywhere, He created mothers.
U r creating ur guitar music with ur words...
It's really true...
U have done someting different...
aS NOBODY HERE has posted something for her mother...
U r that lucky one...
Keep on doing ur great job on yahoo answers...
Wow, that's very deep, and of course, reminds me of my mum too... ^_^
Did you think of it yourself? Because it is good...
2007-09-10 04:51:11 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
U r creating ur guitar music with ur words...
It's really true...
U have done someting different...
aS NOBODY HERE has posted something for her mother...
U r that lucky one...
Keep on doing ur great job on yahoo answers...
We want it...
2007-09-10 00:30:41 · answer #4 · answered by bali... 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That is very nice, I would feel proud to receive it from my son.
2007-09-09 11:23:58 · answer #5 · answered by Dianne L 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I like it very much, I'll read it to my mother too , thankx
2007-09-09 11:28:08 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very nice.
2007-09-09 12:46:49 · answer #7 · answered by Simmi 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wonderful!!
it seems like u miss & love ur mother very much...
2007-09-09 12:01:40 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
hi Gu!t@r....
its really an awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee poem.....superb....i feel very lucky 4 those ppl who can read dis poem out 2 their mothers...az i m not dat lucky...az i don hav my mom......she left me behind wid my step mom...who iz az usual veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy bad....but i'll coney dis poem 2 her thru god...well watever awesome poem....gud job...tc...sweet dreamz...bye...
*****wHenEvEr ! f!nd kEy 2 $ucCe$$, $um1 ch@ngE$ dE LocK.....*****.
2007-09-09 11:48:39 · answer #9 · answered by $@LLu 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
great ..a real feeling and agood language can create agood poem ...keep writing .
2007-09-10 16:30:17 · answer #10 · answered by the town man 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋