har khushi aapke hisse mein
har gham humare hisse mein
har aasani aapke hisse mein
har mushkil humare hisse mein
har muskurahat aapke hisse mein
har mayusi humare hisse mein
aur kya kahe ae mere dost humara
har pyaar aapke hisse mein
aapka har nafrat humare hisse mein
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ek ek pal,ek ek arsa ki tarah guzarta hai
ek ek pal,ek ek arsa ki tarah guzarta hai
dil mein jo dard hai woh kanch ki tarah chubta hai
pyar sab ke liye banaya hai
seh ke liye bas dard aur gham ka saaya ha
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Dil mein jo tadap hai bechani kaise bataye kisiko,
jab seh par barosa nahi kisiko.
dost jisse samjha humne woh bewafa nikle
pyar karke bataya nahi jaata kisiko
jo tadap humare dil mein hai,woh na de kisiko
par Allah har khushi de har kisiko .
2007-09-07 17:37:05 · 20 answers · asked by SmArTy SeHeR cHaNd 4 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
Great I don't understand that u are in love or not.But 1 thing all were equally good.
arj hain,
TUMSA KOI AGAR MILA HOTA ZINDAGI BAN JAATI
TUM NA MILE TO KOI GHAM NAHI
TUMHE TO KAM SE KAM TUMHARA SAATHI MIL GAYA.
really I m not good in Shayri
Best of luck, KHUDA AAP KO KAMYAAB KARE AAMIN.
2007-09-07 18:43:10 · answer #1 · answered by zuber d 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Zaroori toh nahi ke jeene ke liye koi sahara ho
zaroori toh nahi ke hum jis ke hai woh bhi hamara ho
kuch kashtiyaa dhoob jaaya karti hai
zaroori toh nahi ke har kashti ke liye kinara ho.
yeahi sochkea humbhi jiya kartea hay dost.
2007-09-09 11:25:05 · answer #2 · answered by apurva m 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Dear Smarty,
Each Sayari Ek-Se-Badkar Ek Hai. But the last one I like very much. Really Heart Touching.
Yours,
Badal,
badal_meghadas@yahoo.co.in
2007-09-08 02:14:28 · answer #3 · answered by badal_meghadas 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
None of them..pyar hai to khumari honi chahiye..chahe aapke paas rahe ya na rahe aap apne aapko kamjor nahi samzo..aur bhi kaam life mein hote hai keep urself busy..shayree likhne me waqt barbad nahi karna chahiye..be happy ..
2007-09-08 01:03:49 · answer #4 · answered by Diya 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
These were very good...What does the word AASANI mean in ur first saayari in third line.. but overall HUM AAPKI SAAYARI KE MUREED HAIN.. God Bless You.
2007-09-09 02:48:46 · answer #5 · answered by abhi 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think u r
M!ND BLOWING...
Try to change some words in ur shayri...
I think u can touch sky...
think little bit more to modify this shayaris...
Still all r good
but
3rd was somewhat more...
I love the peoples,
who try to do something different...
that's
y i love u...
2007-09-10 00:25:26 · answer #6 · answered by bali... 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
dats gr8
jannat ka hai noor tumhara , mere saagar ka hai tu kinara,
tu mane ya na mane , mere aasmaan ka tu hi hai ek sitara
2007-09-08 13:33:31 · answer #7 · answered by Amit G 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
all r nice
keep it up
this is 4 u...
mahoobat har insaan ko aajmati hai, kisi pe muskurati hai,to kisi se ruth jati hai, mahoobat khail hai aisa kisi ka kuch nahi jata, aur kisi kisi jaan chali jaati hai.
aisi bewaffai ki, usne ki mahoobat bhi badnaam ho gayi, apne pyar ki itni badi kimmat wasul ki usne ki hammari kabar bhi neelam hoo gayi.
bye
Tc
2007-09-08 04:55:47 · answer #8 · answered by Raja 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
All r good but I like the third one most
2007-09-08 01:04:21 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Wah Wah
Its nice to know that you are in love. Be happy
2007-09-08 01:02:37 · answer #10 · answered by satishfreeman 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋