{my daughter has it *^_^*}
Dsyelixa
Waht in the wrold is wrnog wtih me?
I'd swron I wrtoe taht rgiht!
My pen geos dwon and wriets aornud
The wrods I had in mnid.
Yes, I eidt all my wrok
And wehn I'm satsifeid
Smoenoe ponits out to me
"It's deny not d-n-e-y!"
Thnak-goondess for techonlogy
At laest now I can tpye
For I now have "spell-checker"
To keep my writings, right!
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(For those of you who could'nt follow, the norm is below)
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Dyslexia
What in the world is wrong with me?
I'd sworn I wrote that right!
My pen goes down and writes around
The words I had in mind.
Yes, I edit all my work
And when I'm satisfied
Someone points out to me
"It's deny not d-n-e-y!"
Thank goodness for technology
At least now I can type
For I now have "spell-checker"
To keep my writings, right!
2007-09-06 23:15:08 · 11 answers · asked by ? 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I can read on a mirror, or upside down, nearly as well
as normal right side up and left to right.
I've never really found it to be a disadvantage.
UVLULLa.BY-Ba,,,
2007-09-07 00:46:26 · answer #1 · answered by max c 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Shad, that was a very clever piece. It's true that if you have the first and last letters in the right place, it doesn't matter what order the others are in in order to read it (see, it "is" possible to use "in" twice in a row!). That being said, take a look at line four...you need to change "mind" to "sight", or "write", or something that rhymes with "right"...."the words I tried to write" would work pretty well here. Next, let's jump down to the "deny" line...it should be "denied", so how about, "dneied is spelled "d-e-n-i-e-d"!"? Finally, I'd reverse the word order in the third line from the bottom so it read, "at least I now can type"...it mirrors the next line and flows a little easier.
All in all...well done! keep writing
2007-09-11 14:40:50 · answer #2 · answered by Kevin S 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Loved it, Made me think of the study at Cambridge University.
They found that spelling is quite irrelevant if you put in the right letters in the wrong order, so long as the first and last letters are in the correct place.
It's knid of lkie a form of cdoe taht the barin lokos at and dedices waht wrod it is, redarglses of how it mghit look.
2007-09-07 10:36:57 · answer #3 · answered by Dondi 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Im sorry about your daughter. Nice poem good flow and rhyme. Keep Writting!
2007-09-08 00:44:40 · answer #4 · answered by Sh00ting_St@r! 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Thank you for clearing this up
for a moment I thought I was on
one of my wrod csramblse ( word scrambles )
but I was able to interpret your poem
when it was scrambled up.
2007-09-07 10:38:29 · answer #5 · answered by sweet_blue 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
...and you were worried about writers block.
AGAIN you work is amazing. Just keep writing whenever you may have a little block, and then you will right (or write, but not rite) your problem out .
Keep going girl, great stuff !!!!!!!!!!!
2007-09-07 10:36:40 · answer #6 · answered by Captain Mozar 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
LOL!
You must have had a wild night...these are a step above for you. This is a collection on it's way to being a good book.
2007-09-07 08:41:22 · answer #7 · answered by TD Euwaite? 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i don't know what's wrong with me too, i was able to read your first writing with all the letters mixed up. don't worry there's a cure for dyslexia, i think!
2007-09-07 07:20:42 · answer #8 · answered by kittykat 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
thats so cool, i love that poem!
i understood the top aswell as the bottom.
:)
2007-09-07 13:21:13 · answer #9 · answered by Katia Spyhalski 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
this poem is soo kooll.....u should submit it at poetry.com.....u might be nominated and win something...my sister have it too...i know how hard it is
2007-09-11 15:22:55 · answer #10 · answered by Xiana 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋