kisses in the rain,
days without blame,
the things we all wont tend to always be the same.
who am i? and who are you?
you know us? yeah we we're special us two.
but i can't believe your gone, it's been so long.
tears still fill my eyes,
even though we're done with our goodbyes.
with time the pain may fade, but the blame will always be on me for what happened that day.
even though your 6 feet under, the pain is still the same.
the day you left, is the day i know it would never be the same
Yeah...so whats you people thinks? =]
2007-09-06 17:43:29 · 3 answers · asked by Ryans Coolage 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
very nice and well put together
2007-09-06 17:53:58 · answer #1 · answered by thinking 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like your free verse. It inspired me to write a response that contained the same number of syllables in each line.
it starts out a dream,
perfect, so it'd seem
we make ourselves agree so not to lose esteem.
individuality
discarded with personality.
i can't believe i gave, became your slave.
tears still fill my eyes
even though you do not realize
the pain will never fade; but i'll never blame myself again for what happened that day.
even though you're gone forever, you're with me just the same.
but i'll go on, with memories of you and kisses in the rain.
2007-09-07 12:12:31 · answer #2 · answered by Scotty Doesnt Know 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
sound like "question asking" (the question mark slang)...
2007-09-07 00:51:59 · answer #3 · answered by Noname 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋