Its Called- Remember a time?
Remember a time when it just used to be, all about you and all about me? when things where so healthy and everything was great.
That time when you became more that my mate?
Remember a time when it used to be?, Cozy nights in, just you and me, you'd get the chocolate and i'd get the tea!, then we'd both snuggle up on that big huge settee?
Remember a time when it used to be?, me watching the clock for just after three?, Knowing that you'd soon be home and we could once again be alone, I'd kiss you so deeply and hold you so tight, then we'd make love all through the night.
Remember a time when it used to be?, that time when we both where free...
2007-09-06 13:08:01 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
kinda seems like your looking back on a relationship thats now over. its lovely all the same though, well done m8!
2007-09-07 10:22:05 · answer #1 · answered by evilbunnyhahaha 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I remember similar times and feelings. And because it is written from your heart to another's, it's great.
Quite often I ask my life's partner, "Remember when we used to be in love?" and just to keep me on my toes, sometimes he answers, "No".
It could use a wee bit of editing, though '-)
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2007-09-06 19:10:57 · answer #2 · answered by Schittzu 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it, and I know what your talking about. I have a 2 year old son. Good job.
2007-09-06 13:16:10 · answer #3 · answered by Sippy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You've got that loving feeling, but do I detect a hint of sadness and uncertainty?
2007-09-06 22:21:45 · answer #4 · answered by inthedark 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't look for opinions here.
It seems more like letter than a poem.
But I'm sure you're partner will love it! It's very heartfelt.
2007-09-06 14:37:10 · answer #5 · answered by Sumie 5 · 1⤊ 2⤋
i liike it but it's a little romantic for my liking
2007-09-07 05:03:14 · answer #6 · answered by claire 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I liked it.
g-day!
2007-09-08 10:03:57 · answer #7 · answered by Kekionga 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You wrote that??? It was beautiful!! I really mean it!! You should get it published!! WOW!!
2007-09-06 13:20:08 · answer #8 · answered by Polar Molar 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
that is really lovely, touching!
2007-09-06 13:29:50 · answer #9 · answered by caroline 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is very, very good.
2007-09-06 13:29:44 · answer #10 · answered by Kirks Folley 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋