homework help plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1?

Question

ok i am in 10th grade...i was assigned a metaphor of myself. i was suppose to write at least 4 lines.
---directions: Find an object that captures your personality and reveals who you are. State the metaphor on the first line. Now think of 4 more aspects of that object that can be used to
reveal bout ur self.

I am like a calculator as there is endless possiblities,
I think logically and rarely make mistakes and when i do, i know when to correct myself,
Math is my Strongest subject that i am particulary good at and nothing else,
Calculating simple data comes as easy as pressing the equal key,

what did you think of it thus far? also can you guys tell me what the closure might be...plz i wanna get a good grade. plz tell me a closure...thank you

Answer 1

Its not bad although I would point out that are some aspects which might be criticized.

One other small point. Saying "I am LIKE a calculator" is a simile. What you need to say is "I AM a calculator" if a metaphor is what is called for.

Calculators don't "rarely make mistakes." They never make mistakes unless they are broken and non-functional. Furthermore they don't correct themselves except on Star Trek.

Math is not a calculators "strongest subject" but rather its only subject. To the best of my knowledge, calculators do not write poetry or play football or do anything else besides math.

Answer 2

okay. in your question,
you teacher said metaphor, you gave a smilie using like or as. metaphor is like, the ocean is a diamond. you're using two things, and writing them without like or as. i think that was your only problem, and the rest is pretty good(:

Answer 3

The girls in my math class really know how to press my buttons.

Answer 4

I love it....great so far!
No matter how you sum it up....it is all me!

Get is sum....being like the sum of something
or everything added together creates me