why(in atdditon to all of that) (which) in this sentence is wrong?

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why(in atdditon to all of that) (which) in this sentence is wrong?

Improve my reading,and learning new words. In addition to all of that I have to spend more time reading, which I think reading is a big factor........

2007-09-06 08:24:37 · 3 answers · asked by nagi200220022000 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help

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Additionally, I have to spend time reading, which is a large component... (to my academic success?)

2007-09-06 08:34:16 · answer #1 · answered by Lauren 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋

In addition, I have to spend more time reading because reading is a big factor....

2007-09-06 15:43:34 · answer #2 · answered by martinmagini 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋

1] work on reading
2] work on spelling
3] work on grammer
4] the tenses in each sentence don't even match each other, let alone the rest of the question!

2007-09-06 15:35:14 · answer #3 · answered by Nurse Susan 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋