When I come to the end of the road
And the sun has set for me
I want no rites in a gloom-filled room.
Why cry for a soul set free?
Miss me a little--but not too long
And not with your head bowed low.
Remember the love that we once shared,
Miss me--but let me go.
For this is a journey that we all must take
And each must go alone.
It's all a part of the Master's plan,
A step on the road to home.
When you are lonely and sick of heart
Go to the friends we know
And bury your sorrows in doing good deeds.
Miss Me--But Let me Go!
2007-09-06 05:47:02 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I really like it! Are you a professional poet?
2007-09-06 05:51:03 · answer #1 · answered by metalgods 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I'd really love to give you a star, but since I am looged on from work, the company firewall blocks javascript and won't allow me to use the star function.. I'll log on when I get home and star you properly. In the meantime have a virtual star and a virtual huggle and squeezle to hold you till then.
Ok, home now starred ya..
2007-09-06 09:33:19 · answer #2 · answered by Dondi 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's good, but have you ever greived over someone who has died before their time?
Did you find it easy 'to just let go'?
I don't think doing good deeds is sufficient to bury sorrow, it should be faced, cried over and finally accepted.
2007-09-06 05:53:02 · answer #3 · answered by Dan 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it..:)
4 1/2 stars.
u could get it published u know...
have u ever heard of creative communiactions? There's an adult division. You could even go to Vegas..! Good luck:)
2007-09-06 06:44:55 · answer #4 · answered by anonymous123455555 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nicely written poem,, it shows allot of your feelings coming out, and how you look at life and how you have made peace with letting things go. and that when you are gone that its OK to miss you but remember the good things and let you go.
i liked it allot,,, keep up the good work. :)))))))))))))))))))))
2007-09-06 10:46:11 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I LOVE THIS POEM...
Last year my family lost a very important person. And this poem is perfect for her.
2007-09-06 05:52:30 · answer #6 · answered by crisbi_bb 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great poem...keep up the good work
2007-09-06 06:46:35 · answer #7 · answered by You Are My Wings So I Can Fly 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's good, though rather cliche.
Keep writing!
2007-09-06 13:23:25 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it. It reminds me of my Dad and what he said when he left.
2007-09-10 03:32:10 · answer #9 · answered by loretta 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i luv it its brilliant its got a lot of deep meaninngs 2 it
its really good!!!!!!
2007-09-06 05:59:00 · answer #10 · answered by xx~sukhi~xx 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋