What do you think of this poem?
The words from her lips,
Say she’s great.
The story from her eyes,
Suggest she’s just fine.
The smile on her face,
Shows she loves this race.
Her daily conversations,
Speak her actions.
One glance her way,
And you think she’s ok.
She’s an artist every day,
Her lie is a masterpiece.
Impossible to see through,
She’s in need of a breakthrough.
There’s a story unknown to you,
It’s the untold story of a hurting girl.
2007-09-05 07:20:47 · 7 answers · asked by Jessiexxlove 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Its about a friend of mine.
2007-09-05 07:28:12 · update #1
Not bad 7 1/2 out of 10
2007-09-05 07:27:56 · answer #1 · answered by Bullz_ eye 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
contained in the area of technology fiction, it is what's calleda temporal paradox --a difficulty brought about by somebody mucking with time commute. while Stewie returns from the destiny he in result runs into himself, because of the fact he replaced into together with his kin from the faster timeline. needless to say the international isn't waiting for 2 Stewie Griffins. So destiny stewie atomizes himself from the present timeline. this way, destiny Stewie keeps expertise of the destiny and the thank you to avert destiny events from occurring lower back.
2016-10-04 01:06:01 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's very true to life and haunting in its simplicity. Well Done!
Hope the real girl finds a breakthrough.
2007-09-05 07:34:40 · answer #3 · answered by anigma 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It was nice, but i thought u should have gone more in dept of the character.
2007-09-05 07:26:28 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice
2007-09-05 07:30:01 · answer #5 · answered by Francesca 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Go cry in the corner....
2007-09-05 07:26:27 · answer #6 · answered by bobemac 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
it is okay
2007-09-05 07:26:52 · answer #7 · answered by mom of 3 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋