Any grammar mistake ???

Question

There are five rubber factory in malaysia, utilising latex as raw material, that have an annual capacity to produce 10 million tons of rubber per annum.

Any grammar mistake ???

Answer 1

Factory is incorrect - should be factories
malaysia should be capitalized - Malaysia
Annual and per annum are redundant -use either , but not in the same sentence.

One possible spelling error, depending upon what country you are from -- utilising is also spelled utilizing.

Answer 2

It should read: "In Malaysia, there are five rubber factories utilizing latex as a raw material, which have an annual capacity to produce ten million tons of rubber."
Think of syntactic structure, and word relevances. In the way you wrote it, it made it sound like Malaysia was utilizing the latex rubber rather than the factories. Switch it to make it clearer to your audience. Another trick to look out for that my college English teacher taught me: look for the word "that". Usually it can be replaced with a more active word.

Answer 3

In addition to what the above answerers have noted, there's an awkwardness in the sentence (where you have "raw material that" when the pronoun "that" doesn't refer to the raw material) and a redundancy (annual/per annum). The sentence needs complete rewriting. My suggestion:

In Malaysia there are five rubber factories that use latex as a raw material, and their total annual rubber production capacity is 10 million tons.

Answer 4

There are no grammar errors, but you should probably change your sentence to look like this.

There are five rubber factories in Malaysia utilizing latex as raw material that have the capacity to procuce ten million tons of rubber per annum.

Answer 5

Yes there are errors. 5 is a plural, therefore factory should be factories. Malaysia is a country and should be capitalized. You might wish to rewrite the sentence though it could stand with those corrections. (read it out loud and see how it sounds)

Answer 6

Outside a fishmongers was a sign saying "Fresh fish sold here". Passers-by pointed out the redundancy of one word after another until the sign said Fish. Then someone said "You don't have to tell me, I could smell it a block away."

Answer 7

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Answer 8

"Factory" should be "factories," and here in the U.S., "utilising" is spelled "utilizing." The commas aren't necessary, but they're not mistakes, either.

Answer 9

Louissa, Jack has it correct for you as he spelled correctly the few words noted. The commas that you inserted were unnecessary.

I should add that sentences should end with only one exclamation point or only one question mark--never more than one.

Answer 10

rubber factories because it is plural
you don't have to have those commas you know