Are these correct?

Question

Are these phrases correct? If not what should be said instead?
1-"aspirer" students
2-"pyschological" issues
3-the role and "share" of this tools in this problem
4-traditional style "educational fields"
5-"avocational"(or vocational) problems
6-have to leave their intents "accross reaching their goals"
7-responsible for "development and accrediting" ...
8-"tools manner" or "tools policies"(I want to find a word that explaines the way that tools work)
9-to attend classes(or to take part in classes)
10-tools "behavior"( I want to say the way tools act in different cases)
11-"lack(or deficiency)"of schools,(I want to say the number of schools are insufficient)
12-A great proportion "............" to a little one( can you fill the blank with a proper word which shows that you are comparing these two proportions(except 'compared to')

13-what can I say instead of 'such as' or 'for example,or for instance),I have introduced tools and wrote..." such as X tools",now I want to open a () and note the examples of that tools and again introduce the Y tool and in() note its examples.
Is there any short form for 'for example' or what can be said instead.
14-Is this correct to say "these problems explained" or shoudl say "these problems were explained"

Thanks.

Answer 1

1) aspiring students
2) OK
3) the role this tool plays in this problem (note singular tool)
4) OK
5) vocational problems
I'm not sure what you're referring to there, but an avocation is undertaken as a hobby. A vocation is undertaken as a job
6) I don't understand what you want to convey with this one
7) OK or you could use accreditation
8) tool operation (note singular tool)
Even though you are referring to many tools, when you refer to them as a group the word reverts to singular. Alternatively, you could say "the tools' operation"
9) attend classes
10) behavior would be OK
11) insufficient number of schools
12) Substitute "the majority of" for your entire phrase
13) It sounds as though this sentence is becoming way too complex. The presence of multiple explanatory clauses indicates to me that the sentence should be broken up.
14) "these problems are explained" or "these problems were previously explained"

By the way, unless you want to emphasize the fact that problems exist, you might consider the use of other words - issue, consideration, concern, ... - in place of problem

Answer 2

1) aspiring 2)this is fine. 3) the role and function (?) of the tools in this problem. 4)this seems fine. 5)vocational 6)ultimately (?) reaching their goals 7)sounds fine 8)tools functions 9)to participate in classes. 10)the different uses of the tools. 11)the insufficient number of schools. 12)a great proportion versus a smaller one. 13)not exactly sure what you are implying maybe, in comparison the y tool has this ability 14)these issues have been explained... Hope this helps a little. Good Luck

Answer 3

I am not an English teacher.
(1) aspiring students
(2) correct
(3) roll and sharing
(4) traditionally styled
(5) Correct
(6) across the reach of their goals
(7) development and accreditation
(8) replace with "policies associated with tools"
(9) correct
(10) tools' behavior. (add an apostrophy)
(11) correct

Answer 4

The sentence does not seem ultimate. in certainty it demands little extra explaining wrt Programming. in case you mean a form of laptop programming, then the sentence must be: I consistently sense hungry for the duration of programming.