Let Me Show (rnb/hip song)
Verse 1
From the beginning, I thought you and me
could happen, thought it was meant to be..
But it was all a dream, like a clip from a movie scene.. But if you let me get a chance, and i'll show u the man i could be..
Chorus
Let me show you what i could be
the type of person you never thought you see,Let me show, the things i could do
like showing you my love for you
Yeahh. Let me show
All my talents, all my skills today
you'll be blown away
So Let me Show.. You.
Verse 2
Yeahh.. Look what you let me show you
suprised?? arent you..?
You probably thought I would blew this
but you got to admit it
I was good enough to let you into my stuff
So girl, did I get the chance to take over your heart?
because girl this is the beginning.. a new start
cuz yeahh..
Repeat Chorus
Verse 3
Yeahh
Did i deseve that shot?
Could I be apart of that heart?
Or Do I have to show u
a side you need to know
Let me Show... You What I could Be.
2007-09-04 16:34:02 · 12 answers · asked by Lauren 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Other - Music
Great job... but can you sing it? *shifty eyes* Naw, man, I'm just messin wit ya. But um. Seriously, you should get that copyrighted before some one comes along... do do do do do. And says, "Hey, look a person just wrote me next single!" Thank would suck!! I mean, I would post some of my rough songs online, you know ones that I know I need to tweek, but your song looks pretty good, but you just need to get the lines down right and you'll be on your way. Hey, um, I'll watch for you on TRL soon. :)
Anyways, your song seems a slow one, so if you do ever produce it, make sure it's not too fast, and I hope your video's awesome!
I'm a major Gwen Stefani and No Doubt fan, it's totally a different kind of music, the way I read it anyway, and well, I just hope it goes well for ya!
2007-09-04 17:13:53 · answer #1 · answered by Gwen Freak 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW!! that is so wonderful, u r truly a talented writer. Send it n2 hollwood ecords, it'll make u famous! if u want 2 be that is. Since ur asking 4 nput, i am gonna add to the lyrics, im not tryin 2 offend u and u can completely disregaurd it if u want, i think it would make it better, but, u r writing this from an expeirence, so it may sound off, Im not trying to offend u. in the chorus where it says like showing u my luv 4 u, try adding, lyk shoing u GIRL my luv 4 u. Also n the part, all my talents, all my skills 2day, you'll be blown away. Add n TRUST ME BABY, you'll be blown away. But also remember, u have put this to a beat of ur own, so the lyrics have to work around the beat so wut i've added in may not work. Hope i helped and I'll be looking for you on american idol or trl!
2007-09-04 16:49:17 · answer #2 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i pass to throw a splash historic importance to the authentic 10 Rock songs... 10) Johnny B Goode - Chuck Berry -on a similar time as lots of the early songs that got here out interior the infancy of rock, no different truly sums up what the hot form of song replaced into; So referred to as "***** song", that rejuvinized the childrens of u . s . (and the international). 9) the place Is My suggestions? - The Pixies - the alternative era's difinitive song from the band that did no longer proceed to exist the top effect as a unit. 8) Head Like A hollow - 9 Inch Nails - introduced digital song to the grunge era. 7) Anarchy interior the united kingdom - The intercourse Pistols - the main suitable punk song from the main suitable punk band. 6) Shine On You loopy Diamond - purple Floyd - ought to this have been the 1st emo song (sans the screamo)? isn't rock approximately letting your voice heard and donning your thoughts on your sleeve? 5) Smells Like youngster Spirit - Nirvana - on a similar time as Nirvana might have had some greater advantageous songs, and of direction gave us the Foo combatants... that's the song that revived rock song for yet another era. in 15 years (or so) yet another song will thieve this one's thunder, like this song did to Anarchy interior the united kingdom 4) Paranoid - Black Sabbath -Rock's dark component with a heavy beat. The fathers of Heavy steel. 3) stroll this way - Run DMC - Why this version extremely of Areosmith's unique? that's what joined at the same time rock and hip hop and introduced the rock form complete circle. 2) an afternoon interior the existence - The Beatles - area concept, area (mini) opera, all rock! it is tense to %. one Beatles song for a rock record, yet this one no longer purely performed off of the Sgt Pepper subjects, yet confirmed what replaced into to return from a "studio band" one million) Like A Rolling Stone - Bob Dylan - How does a individuals guy make his way onto a rock record? via pissing of all those at Newport with a rock set and making Like a Rolling Stone the large transistion song between rock and individuals. Dylan inspired many a rock artist while he went electric powered.
2016-10-09 23:40:32 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW! that was rele good but i hope u already copywrote it or else ur in deep dog crap! but other than that i RELE RELE RELE RELE like it, it had alot of meaning 2 it and good its not a mooshy mooshy song it is but it isnt cause u put it into a hip hop beat or at least u said at the top! hehe good JOB!!!
2007-09-04 16:43:14 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's pretty good; I like it...
I agree with King John though; somebody may take it and make it their own.
2007-09-04 16:49:51 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good
2007-09-04 16:39:58 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's decent...just hope no one reads this and uses it as their own. they'll make millions off yer song and you'll feel like a dipsh!t.
2007-09-04 16:39:07 · answer #7 · answered by King John 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Can you sing it again? I didnt hear it!
2007-09-04 16:39:42 · answer #8 · answered by 4 strings 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ehhh. its good.
i would have to hear it with the music
2007-09-04 16:40:08 · answer #9 · answered by riaaa 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its alright
2007-09-04 16:36:51 · answer #10 · answered by ChelseaSmile:) 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋