I wrote this song. i am 14. what do you think?
Dawn of a new beginning.
You are my path
Can’t stay away
Nowhere to hide
On this fateful day
Another eve, with truth unmasked
I am the beast
Dark skies at last.
The moon has risen and I had too,
A blessing for me, and a dream pursued
We watch the witch, round fire craft,
No longer a child, but one at heart.
Owwwwwww!
No gates for Heaven
Never on the tip of my tongue
Whispered a secret of cinders
And a Christ yet to come
For Her scaled body, and it came at last
Cast a spell on me, my pain is halved.
A change is coming and I am too
Lamia shouted “But I wanted you”
The pain clouds dripping
Now liquid form
Of a new day rising
Life is the storm.
Yeeeeeeeaaaaahhhh…
Dawn of a new beginning
This is…
The start of a real beginning
But there is no change
Hold back my old life’s livings
Myself restrained.
I walk a path
Must stay away
A wrist was carved
And scars remain
Ungrateful eve, unridden grasp
Voice of a beast
Grey skies had passed.
2007-09-04 09:55:12 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Other - Music
You cant say someone had talent on lyrics alone. Put it on top of a beat and see how far it gets you.
2007-09-04 10:00:52 · answer #1 · answered by Finoman 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Give me the Youtube link or number. I'd love to hear you preform this song.
2007-09-04 17:03:06 · answer #2 · answered by Puppy Zwolle 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Those lyrics are GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep on writing songs someday you may be famous!
2007-09-04 17:04:03 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
AWSOME DO YOU HAVE A VID OF IT SONDS GREAT AWSOME!!!!!!!! MY YOUTUBE IS YOTUBE_WASHINGTON95 COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2007-09-04 17:00:20 · answer #4 · answered by Joe(Static) 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋