Does anyone want this short piece of fiction for their book?

Question

The fuel delivery driver pulled into a busy terminal, the lot was full of travelers, their vehicles were lined at the pumps when an explosion could be seen from miles away. The bomb splattered his blood first, and then his truck, tearing an instant gash into the metal container lighting the spilled fuel as it spread across all those vehicles, flames everywhere. One vehicle escaped the inferno by refusing to stay there, trapped and burned alive. The father drove the family through a barrier of flames, the rubber on the tires were burning to. He managed to drive through a small opening of vehicles out into a safe place not far from the terminal. He has divine guidance, his family saved.

Answer 1

Writing fiction is harder than it looks.

If you'd like to write compelling fiction, a good starting point would be to read a book about point of view. This little story's point of view is a sort of free-floating omniscience that contributes to the lack of drama even though there is plenty of action.

Answer 2

Too many actually, and what's 'short' thats a relative term - right that could be some books a million Little products Touching The Void severe Tide: How climate disaster is Engulfing Our Planet: information from a Warming international The Calendar: The 5000 300 and sixty 5 days war To Align The Clock and the Heavens The Newtonian on line casino The Double Helix fixing Stonehenge The inhabitants Bomb Bravo 2 0

Answer 3

Don't offer free material when someone else can just take it without your authorization ...copyright everything, trust nobody, that's the poet's code (and a writers)

Answer 4

probably not.

Answer 5

no. Thanks.