How do you like this poem i wrote?

Question

Pathological Urges- Inge
I sat in my bed,
gave the fatass a look
he glared at me twice
I picked up a book.
I read read read
and he said said said
Evil things that stayed in my head.
I stood up, book in hand
thinking about 'Maiden, my favorite band.
Went to the counter,
picked up the knife
When I stopped reading,
I ended his life.

Answer 1

Yes....it is a sad poem ,but good...

Answer 2

Well done!