well, rate my poem and decide for yourself..then if you like it i may write another one for u
2007-09-04 01:24:58
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answer #1
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answered by I'm insane 3
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The Rainy (Rae NY) Poem
I was a drop, that became part of a puddle.
Where other drops fall, and soon after they settle.
We all form together on the low parts of ground.
When a child steps there, we all splash around!
I was a drop on a cold winter's day,
soon to feel great warmth
when swept up by a ray.
Have a great day Rae NY!
By Golden's Mom
2007-09-04 08:38:05
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answered by golden sephiroth 5
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I have NO sense of poetry.
All I can do is know a tree.
A green Witch is all I am,
So I guess I'll have toast and jam.
I adore a gal from New york City
So, won't you folks have pity?
I live so far away,
but I'll see her some day.
BB,
Raji the Green Witch
2007-09-04 09:21:12
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answer #3
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answered by Raji the Green Witch 7
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If you're down with God, are you are hangin with the brothers?
Are the boys in the hood rappin to Rapture?
Have the monks gone insane lookin for their zippers?
You ain't no fool, mother told you.
Have no faith? Go with the strippers.
If pole dancing is divine, drop that dime.
Kneel no more, time to score.
DV rocks
2007-09-04 08:53:03
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answered by Anonymous
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Rae, Rae ,Rae,
Is there love in New York,
Is there a way?
I don't love New York,
But just let me say
If I'd only met you,
Who knows what I'd do
Rae, Rae, Rae,
For love in New York
Perhaps a new day.
2007-09-04 18:28:13
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answer #5
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answered by Fr. Al 6
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soft sigh on slight damp
dew, on grass, and green were her
eyes like moss
she touched me,
astonishing, she was...
the day would not fall again such as this
petal rose and fawn sleep,
a ray of light on gold hair
2007-09-04 20:27:54
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answer #6
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answered by Lady Morgana 7
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Who said the magic word,
Some bird, wants to be heard,
Here's a rhyme, won't cost a dime,
Call on me, anytime,
Hey you, in the blue,
How'd I do?
2007-09-04 09:52:58
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answer #7
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answered by TD Euwaite? 6
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roses are red
violets are blue
some poems rhyme
and others don't
I think mine is Japanese Haiku
2007-09-04 15:09:09
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answer #8
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answered by Chicken Dude..Vinster 6
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read all of them n lemme know if i am good
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2007-09-04 08:46:49
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answer #9
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answered by Anonymous
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