No goodbye.?

Question

I held your hand through all of these breathtaking years.
I've tried so hard to tell myself that your gone.
When i cried,you'd wipe away my tears.
You would hold me close.
Tell me it would be okay.

What i wouldn't do to hear your voice.
To feel your touch.
Mixed emotions.

I told you i do not need help,
and i can take care of myself.
I told you that one night.
Only a week before you became sick.

I remember rushing to your bed.
Crying out my apoligies.
Begging you could hear me.
I feel like i'm falling.
Falling forever.
I cant breath.
Go ahead and scream at me for being a *****.
I've got to break through to you.
Wake up.
I'm drowning in misery.

You gazed into my eyes,one last time.
A smile lit your face.
You told me ,you thought i hated you,and that you thought you would never see me again.
Your last words were I love you.
I sent no reply.
No goodbye.
But a kiss.
Both our first kisses.
Though for you it would also be your last.

I remembered,you were the one that brought me out of the dark.
You woke me up inside.
I'm sorry.
Sorry i can not bring you back to life.

You will remember your exit from this world,
With No Goodbye
No Goodbye My Darling
only a kiss.

I only hope this was enough.

Shattered-This poem really happened.Demetri was the only one who understood me.Now he's gone.
A friend of mine quoted"Sometimes you have to ignore the bad comments.Some peoople have no sense of understanding.You have to believe in your words and ignore the ones that have no understanding of what your words mean."
I understand,but you do not.

Answer 1

that's so deep and beautiful.

I love it.

I wrote a story similar to this
once...I admire your style.

Answer 2

SO many poems just like this on YA, and so many people thinking they can write good poetry when they have a 'dark' idea. My friend tried to write a dark poem, and it sucked. She felt she was really good at it, but wrote something to the tune of:
She stands by the window waiting for the phone that won't ring, and the car and father she'll never see again.

Umm, can anyone say ' CRAP '!!!!???? Yah, take a lesson.

Answer 3

The kiss was a beautiful Goodbye

Answer 4

To each his own. I loved it.