http://www.slide.com/s/FL4ja7Ve4T_ppKs_1rbhtpQdSJvSJNGm
This is the link to it.
Can you give me an honest opinion of this drawing, and what you may see wrong with it?
2007-09-03 07:09:33 · 4 answers · asked by Ryder 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Visual Arts ➔ Drawing & Illustration
The left side of her face (the side closest to the sunset) is too forward for the way her head is turned. You need to round out the skull more and pull her left eye, cheek, and further back.
Also, I think your values could do with a bit more gradation between them. While I get the suggestion of which face is in light and which is in shadow, it's not enough to provide a clear-cut definition. The brightness of the highlight suggests that you did this from a photo. If that's the case, next time it would look much nicer to tone down the highlight and try to save bright white as an accent for the most prominent features, as opposed to using it for the entire highlight area.
The hair looks great. You captured the texture well and did a good job of defining the strands while still keeping a sense of the overall hair form. Nice!
As a last note, I think the sunset is a little distracting for this image. I think moving the a little higher up and toning down the saturation on the sunset's colors would have made it blend into the background much better.
It's a nice piece overall, and I think with some more practice you'll produce some real beauties. Keep it up!
2007-09-03 08:59:08 · answer #1 · answered by OodlesofNoodles 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it. i can tell you put a lot of work into it.
2007-09-03 14:47:27 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice. looks very authentic.
2007-09-03 14:17:20 · answer #3 · answered by dianed33 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its so beautiful.....may i ask who it is?
2007-09-03 14:53:15 · answer #4 · answered by mommy_to_be 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋