How does this sound?

Question

I made this up in about two minutes. Ignore the bad quality please = )

http://minorcrisis.net/users/axelgronblad/423097/

Listen to the whole thing, the verses build up to a really good chorus. It's not done yet. = )

Thanks everyone!! = )

Oh, and if you don't like this kind of music please don't rate it = )

Thanks!!

Answer 1

It had no lyrics, but the melodies were good.