I work in Downtown Los Angeles and I see alot of LOST SOULS in the skid row area. My heart goes out to them at their "existence" in life.
ALONE AND ON THE STREETS ONE DAY.
I PRAYED THE POLICE WOULD COME MY WAY.
TO PICK ME UP WHEN I HAD FELL.
BECAUSE ON MYSELF I COULD NOT TELL.
THAT I WAS DOWN AND OH SO LOW.
MY THINKING HAD DEALT ME A FATAL BLOW.
THE SKYS ARE GRAY AND NEVER BLUE.
I NEVER KNOW QUITE WHAT TO DO.
I WALK ALONE AND ALONE AM I.
WOULD IT BE EASIER IF I JUST DIE.
HOW DO I PICK UP AND UNDO MY WRONG.
WHERE CAN I FIND THE STRENGTH TO BE STRONG?!
2007-09-02 16:26:06 · 6 answers · asked by 100% ♥Creole♥ 7 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Very nice. It ask some good questions we both know where the answers are....
2007-09-04 10:05:09 · answer #1 · answered by Ron B. 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
this is a 10 / 10
2016-04-03 00:30:47 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That really captures some people's experience of homelessness, once they are their sometimes they do not believe that they deserve better and it becomes a cycle (like when you said the skies are always gray and never blue and then just before that you say about the negative thinking.)
It's really good.
2007-09-02 17:02:47 · answer #3 · answered by Abbasangel 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I thought it was about McDonald's chicken McNuggets actually but what do I know?!?
2007-09-03 10:32:06 · answer #4 · answered by LOL 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes, I think its a very good poem. It is sad isn't it?
2007-09-02 16:32:38 · answer #5 · answered by lucy02 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Pretty good - you are very compassionate.
2007-09-02 16:30:55 · answer #6 · answered by Your Mom 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋