I wrote this song about an hour ago. It was just on a whim, so I didn't pay attention to much of anything. Its a mix of R&B and country. Like Tiffany Evans meets Taylor Swift:
I think about you
When I have nothing else to do
It makes me so sick
To my stomach
Thinking about what has been
'Cause now you seem so foreign
-CHORUS-
I guess that is what happens
When people drift apart
I'm taking back the key to my heart
And to the Mercedes-Benz
(yeah)
We used to be so close
But tensions have since rose, oh
It's time for me to close the door
'Cause you became such a bore
-CHORUS-
We resolved to stay friends
But I guess this is how it ends
Nothing between us
Get outta here, take the bus!
-CHORUS-
You said: Looks like we have biology together,
I said: This is chemistry!
You said: So you feel it too!?
ha,ha! ha,ha!
-CHORUS-
Oh yeah!
-CHORUS 2x-
Don't let it happen again!
No, oh!
ps; You cannot use these, for any purposes.
2007-09-02 16:18:06 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ R&B & Soul
Its not about any one guy. The melody is like Tiffany Evans's "Promise Ring"
2007-09-02 16:25:55 · update #1
I know what I like.
This ain't it.
2007-09-02 16:21:44 · answer #1 · answered by Stuart 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Cause you became such a bore
You said: Looks like we have biology together,
I said: This is chemistry!
You said: So you feel it too!?
ha,ha! ha,ha!
Get outta here, take the bus!
--change those, other than that its great
2007-09-02 23:23:30 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
i thought it was good but there was 1 line i didn't really think went to good with it, it was the" 'Cause you became such a bore" line but maybe if you just changed it up a little bit it would work better. and i also don't think you really needed the laughing part. but i thought it was good
2007-09-02 23:33:40 · answer #3 · answered by angelofchaos636 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm sorry, it sounds really stupid when you read it and not know the melody. Just based on the lyrics alone, it seems like pretty typical chessy breakup song.
Don't worry no one will use em...
2007-09-02 23:23:29 · answer #4 · answered by bananas4breakfast14 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Songs don't have to rhyme. It'll actually sound better if you don't. Don't put so many ohs. It sounds terrible. Try to keep every verse the same length.
2007-09-02 23:22:58 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
the first verse sucks - everything else has promise. I really like the "chemistry" line.
2007-09-02 23:23:06 · answer #6 · answered by wigginsray 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wait...I heard that Biology / Chemistry line from one of the Disney Channel Sitcoms last week!!....I think it was Zack and Cody...or one of those.
2007-09-05 03:38:04 · answer #7 · answered by pashyon84music 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yuck, a hate song and not a love song.
Plus it is moon in June
Door bore.
Email it to the person you are writing about and try again.
2007-09-02 23:24:06 · answer #8 · answered by Dennis Fargo 5 · 0⤊ 2⤋
depends on the music that goes with it. but yea theyre pretty good i guess =)
2007-09-02 23:21:51 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
eh...its okay i guess...not that greatest thing i have ever heard but decent.
2007-09-02 23:25:49 · answer #10 · answered by ♥Starry Eyed♥ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋