I wrote this song about an hour ago. It was just on a whim, so I didn't pay attention to much of anything. Its a mix of R&B and country. Like Tiffany Evans meets Taylor Swift. (cont.)
2007-09-02 15:41:39 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Lyrics
I think about you
When I have nothing else to do
It makes me so sick
To my stomach
Thinking about what has been
'Cause now you seem so foreign
-CHORUS-
I guess that is what happens
When people drift apart
I'm taking back the key to my heart
And to the Mercedes-Benz
(yeah)
We used to be so close
But tensions have since rose, oh
It's time for me to close the door
'Cause you became such a bore
-CHORUS-
We resolved to stay friends
But I guess this is how it ends
Nothing between us
Get outta here, take the bus!
-CHORUS-
You said: Looks like we have biology together,
I said: This is chemistry!
You said: So you feel it too!?
ha,ha! ha,ha!
-CHORUS-
Oh yeah!
-CHORUS 2x-
Don't let it happen again!
No, oh!
2007-09-02 15:50:57 · update #1
ps; You cannot use these, for any purposes other than promoting me and my musical talents.
2007-09-02 15:53:00 · update #2
I'd like to see them, email them to me please
I just graduated took screenwriting classes and am interested in putting poetry to words for musicals
2007-09-02 15:50:56 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
its a good start for a song, I would recommend working on it a little bit more. Think the part of the car can be taken out and something else be put in its place, confuses me when comprehending the songs lyrics. Other than that I liked it a lot, just work on it or polish it up a little more, might be a song on the radio one day.
2007-09-02 22:58:55 · answer #2 · answered by punkrockerforever 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
these lyrics suck to tell u the truth and you should stop watching the sweet life of zack and cody if your gonna take there stuff.
2007-09-02 22:54:55 · answer #3 · answered by Jessica M 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
its realy good!
I just dont like the door bore part its kinda cheezy.
2007-09-05 14:48:26 · answer #4 · answered by frog princess 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
OMG!!! i love that song! so awsome. the only thing is....its a lil 2 rhyming....but its a cute song
2007-09-02 22:56:52 · answer #5 · answered by aquariusgrl93 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
That song sucks.
2007-09-02 23:16:58 · answer #6 · answered by Your Uncle Dodge! 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
its ok but i dont listen to R&B or country
2007-09-02 23:03:29 · answer #7 · answered by steveo 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well ask miley cyrus at hmfannahmail@gmail.com i have my connections
2007-09-02 22:48:47 · answer #8 · answered by Maeve O 1 · 0⤊ 2⤋
where are the lyrics?
2007-09-02 22:44:52 · answer #9 · answered by Hunter 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋