When I walked into the kitchen, I snagged a strawberry pop tart off of the counter and hugged my mom good-bye. My sister Alyssa, who is 9, hated when I talked to her in the morning, so I didn't bother saying good-bye. I saw the bus pulling up to my house, and ran as fast as I could to catch it. Luckily, I made it just in time. I slouched into a seat next to my best guy friend, Chris. We had been friends since third grade, and always had something interesting to talk about. "Hey, loser." he joked. "Hey Chris." I replied. I sat down next to her and we talked for the whole bus ride while we made fun of “gansta” kids on our bus trying to dance.
When we arrived at school, I was greeted by the always annoying, Tia. "Oh my god, it’s Alex!" She squeaked. "Hey Tia" I mumbled. "ha-ha lacrosse was so much fun yesterday, and did you see Mike! Wow what a hottie, he’s obviously in love with me!” As I laughed to myself, I tried to fake a smile while I realized how conceited some people were.
2007-09-02 04:59:32 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
My dear you are absolutely crazy to post your entire story here. Perhaps you aren't aware the internet is a playground for plagiarists. You story can already be copied dozens and dozens of times. And if you attempt to publish it, no publisher will be interested. It is too much trouble for them to trace back the original ownership. No copyright is any stronger than the bad **** lawyer you hire to protect it. And they cost large amounts of money. I closed my personal website down long ago. I publish nothing online. Not a crumb. My work is well protected and if you want to read it you have to pay for it. Pax- C
2007-09-02 08:47:27 · answer #1 · answered by Persiphone_Hellecat 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It took me awhile to realize the gangsta kids were no different from me. The trying to dance part--- well that was my jealousy because I could never do those moves anymore than annoying Tia could grasp reality. How about adding that part to your story.
Question? How can you call Tia conceited for saying Mike loves her and you believing yourself better than those you have labeled as gangsta. Who is conceited in this story "you or Tia". I think Tia is the better person here because she is not trying to make herself feel better by judging others.
2007-09-02 12:12:44 · answer #2 · answered by Love 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There is some funny stuff here, its a bit more confusing in this section, at least to me. This sounds like my kids who are boys and not girls, but the idea is the same and its funny to read about.
2007-09-02 15:24:17 · answer #3 · answered by princess61470 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋