my new poem could u tell me how it is
i have sinned
ive been cold the weakness is no more
ive been blessed i am told then why am in the devils hold
sinner i am called how will move along
is this my falt did i turn from it all
when hope was lost an angel came from above
and gave me the light i had lost
i am pure once more now i walk away from the darkness in which i was locked in
i hope u like it
2007-09-02 04:44:58 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
that's nice...its sweet..am i the angel? lolz,. who told u to be good?
2007-09-02 04:55:33 · answer #1 · answered by ♥~Paki_G1rL~♥ 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Woo hoo, another poem by my second fave paki !! This one bring mwah down but since im one of the "angels" woohoo you get a star from me! Nice poem :D
p.s if I ever get told to make a poem from school you better be ready *grins*
2007-09-02 06:14:25 · answer #2 · answered by ஐ♥-mªrìªm-ஐ♥ 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I read this twice. The way you layer longer story-related prose is admirable, and something I have much trouble with. You make it seem effortless, natural, but all of us who write know the opposite is true. I often measure the effectiveness of a piece by the number of TD's........Jealousy rears it's green head. Kudos to you, Mr Carney.
2016-05-19 03:32:50 · answer #3 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
in the dark people may tread
feeling lost and dead
but at the end of the line
we should eat and dine
for angels are here
erasing all fear
...cheers buddy!
2007-09-02 04:56:37 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
NiCe
2007-09-02 21:14:58 · answer #5 · answered by jasmine 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sorry bieng late
it is a ver beutiful poem
and i think i can not understand you.
who are you talking about???!!!
anyway i like the poem
2007-09-02 10:00:23 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i loved that...ur poem's great
keep it up
A Star 4 Ya
2007-09-02 04:52:45 · answer #7 · answered by нƐ∂ıɣƐн 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I liked it very much it was wonder full!
2007-09-02 05:26:20 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
yeah its nice
2007-09-02 05:26:50 · answer #9 · answered by ? 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
wow & wow & wow it is so beautiful
i want to know who is she i mean her beutiful things not her name .
send me if you want to talk about it
2007-09-02 09:56:23 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋