this distance killing me from the inside out,
wanting nothing more than to feel the touch of your lips,
to be held in your arms,
just to see you face to face.
we were meant to be,
a regular romeo and juliet,
destined for each other,
yet still worlds apart.
2007-09-01 17:19:17 · 12 answers · asked by iANNA! 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
this is about joey and raevan cos joey inspired me for the poem with his answer to one of my questions
2007-09-01 17:20:26 · update #1
It is a beautiful, most precious poem I have ever read!
2007-09-01 17:23:15 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's a good one.... I would have to throw in a verse though about the moment arrives and I see your face...hoping for a warm embrace.... but in turn I get an awkward rejection......
something to that effect......
sorry, it's been a long, WEIRD day!
2007-09-02 00:24:31 · answer #2 · answered by AMANDA M 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a nice poem
2007-09-02 00:28:02 · answer #3 · answered by Nico 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great
2007-09-02 00:23:04 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think its great, if I were a teacher I'd give it a 100.
2007-09-02 00:25:01 · answer #5 · answered by Omar H 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. It's the best formated one I've seen, in weeks.
2007-09-02 00:22:24 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it, too. It's a nice poem.
2007-09-02 00:23:25 · answer #7 · answered by ???? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it, alot.
Good job.
Sounds like a song I've heard.
2007-09-02 00:23:33 · answer #8 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
honestly i can relate to that
its beautiful
2007-09-09 20:51:40 · answer #9 · answered by Kalee♥ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not much rhythm.
2007-09-02 00:23:12 · answer #10 · answered by seekingwidow 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋