its kinda cheesey....but here it is...
i think about you all the time
and everyday your on my mind
you make my face turn blu
cuz all i do
is think about you
i hope you dont go
because u should know
it'd kill me so
please kno
that i think about u all the time
and everyday your on my mind
Ps...he makes my face turn blu....cuz he takes my breath away
any critique or responses??
2007-09-01 15:52:43 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I'm sorry but that is awful. If you send this to your crush he will run screaming. Don't send it then he'll know your obsessed.
2007-09-01 18:04:08 · answer #1 · answered by sadielovesgrover 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
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2016-05-19 00:52:37 · answer #2 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You really want to wait to show your feelings more unless and until you are in a relationship. Most people feel that if you show too much emotion up front your are needy or creepy. Besides, if he's not into you, you don't want to be completely embarrassed. Take it slow and give him a few hints or clues and see if you can pick up stuff from him. Then, when you have an idea he might be into you, let him know in a simple way(verbally is usually best, but if you're too shy let him know through a nice song or a short and to the point note). Save the mushy stuff for when you are in a more appropriate place in your relationship. This way, if he is into someone else, you didn't tell him all his feelings and you will not be as hurt or embarrassed. Besides, if you really care for the guy, he'll be worth the wait.
2007-09-01 16:10:00 · answer #3 · answered by Crishelle 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
hmmmmmm.... i kind of like it, but why write him a letter better to say it to his face... be bold and not to be afrid and write it down.. dont b afraid o regection move on he will to... dont let him take away you breath, take away his... think about what you are saying dont make him think all u think about is him that he is you world..... make him think that if he isnt there that u will die or sumtin i hope that everything works out
happy dating
2007-09-01 15:57:27 · answer #4 · answered by legendkillerjjt 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Yeah that's stupid.
you must be a teenager. Don't write "love" letter.
You sound obsessed, pass on the letters girl.
2007-09-01 15:55:34 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 1⤋
hmm..I don't know, I would think that was kinda creppy if i got that. You know what would be really cool though, find songs that have lyrics that show your feelings and make him a CD :)
2007-09-01 15:59:30 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Excuse me, I just had some vomit come up in my throat.
2007-09-01 16:26:45 · answer #7 · answered by Hoot 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
that was really good it feels good just to let your emotions go wild and heres your result a really good one can i use it sometime lol jk
it was amazing good job
2007-09-01 15:55:51 · answer #8 · answered by ♥italianbaby12♥ 2 · 1⤊ 3⤋
You're or ur...not your.
2007-09-01 16:10:07 · answer #9 · answered by DeborahDel 6 · 0⤊ 2⤋