I was born to love yoi, care for yoi, be there for yoi.
Live for yoi, breathe yoi, share with yoi. I promise yoi.
That there is nothing I woildn't do for yoi.
I belong to yoi, made sacrifices to be with yoi, I respect yoi, I admire yoi.
I'm engaged to yoi, I'm boind to yoi, Yoi're my inspiration and so I'd die for yoi.
Yoi're the height of my elevation, the object of my adoration. In my inner-most part I've made this annonciation.
Yoi are the reason I'm giving op my heart to be placed in yoir keeping. The insight of my vision. Why I find soch joy in living.
I give yoi the warmth of my affections for to me yoi have been a blessing.
I see yoir beaotifol face in my sweetest of dreams and when in my presence yoi've calmed my fears.
I have no need to fight my battles alone. Nor garment any scars. Yoi are my protection.
In yoi I've find the most remarkable treasore. I've foind my joy, my life, and my heart. Mi amor. (my love)
2007-09-01 14:45:05 · 5 answers · asked by Sol is Real 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Everybody shut up! This is creative. I like the use of "i" rather than "u" in certain words. Champagne, some of the best poets raise theor poetry with touches of oddity to line it with mystery, and make others wonder... "why is she doing this, and why don't i understand?"
the reason lots of people think negitivly of this work, is plainly because they don't understand it, and when people don't get it, they freak out and say it sucks.
I like it though! ^_^ post more!
2007-09-01 15:15:49 · answer #1 · answered by Tommyknocker 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Honesty? It stoinks.
2007-09-02 00:35:05 · answer #2 · answered by Ronnie 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
iaimtriring to figure oiut hoi to riiod this tink... learn English then try again.
2007-09-01 21:57:51 · answer #3 · answered by Dondi 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Truthfully, not so great.
2007-09-01 22:01:35 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I don't get it.
2007-09-01 22:21:36 · answer #5 · answered by DeborahDel 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋