i see your smile on the horizon and i declare my heart,,,a place big full of love,,u smile at me ,and i jump in joy,,,my soul once empty ,searched in vain till u came and been its mate,.words have defeated me so many times,but today disappointment wont be near my side,this life we build is made for two ,,one heart united solid so true,,i cant say i ,i cant say u ,i say us its destiny my love for one made out of two.,
2007-09-01 02:54:25 · 8 answers · asked by reifguy 6 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I wish i could give the stars and my whole life to the person who loves me so much...
And he writes wonderful words for me...just for me....
It is so amazing, touching the heart of a woman...
2007-09-01 02:57:14 · answer #1 · answered by Leonarda 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Reifguy...beautiful feelings expressed in a beautiful poem. Paquito? Why don't u write a poem for me like that? Leonarda? When should I buy the stefana?
2007-09-01 11:07:34 · answer #2 · answered by dvatwork 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Upon request:
Fear no more our dearest Paquito
Thousands of poems I will write for you.
Your wit, your internal beauty, your Spanish accent
is more than the beauty described above.
It doesn't rhyme, but it is sensitive and sweet.
2007-09-01 10:10:57 · answer #3 · answered by Alice in Wonderbra 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your poem isn't that great (grammatically speaking and the mix of serious and super casual doesn't really help), but the sentiments are wonderful. If this is your life, congratulations and enjoy it!
2007-09-01 10:03:31 · answer #4 · answered by ganzdaoben 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I don't actually enjoy reading these kind of poems. But I thik I really enjoyed reading your poem. It's actually awesome. Really good!
2007-09-01 12:29:18 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
why nobody writes a poem for me?what did i do wrong?
2007-09-01 09:59:55 · answer #6 · answered by Paco 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow, that was beautiful.
2007-09-01 09:59:39 · answer #7 · answered by magnolia 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Bravo !
So romantic...
2007-09-01 10:29:37 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋