i pulled these thoughts out of the sky
when i was dreaming of you
i dragged them down and bound them to this site
so i could give them to you
be careful not to read too quickly,
for they're fabricated by meaning
and woven in truth
the sweet privelege of their semantics
is my gift to you
whoever you are
you are God's gift to me
i love you
2007-08-31 19:36:59 · 7 answers · asked by Jenn 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Beautiful.
However, first thing to do on any website is to check the terms of service. In Yahoo! go to terms of service (clause 9, paragraph c.) and you will see why you should pull this out, if it is original (if it's not, whose is it, and do you have permission to distribute it?)
.
Go to PBwiki.com and start your own PRIVATELY owned wiki (our family's wiki is there). Publish your poetry on your own,
confidential site, and add other people to it, if you wish. Knowing you will keep the rights to your work goes along way towards getting the creative juices flowing.
Your poem touched me. If you decide to do this, invite me and I'll be a fan.
2007-08-31 19:59:51 · answer #1 · answered by ciamalo 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I keep returning to this. I particularly like these lines: Windows framed in orchids captured light making the rose petal floorboards appear to glow They make me feel as though I'm surrounded by suffused light. And the mystery at the end of your poem tickles my imagination...
2016-05-18 04:33:27 · answer #2 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awesome girl!
Like it Like it Like it.
Love you too.
2007-08-31 22:50:47 · answer #3 · answered by cynic 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its really good! I like it, but is that last line really true?! Dont be playing with my emotions! =)
2007-08-31 19:46:15 · answer #4 · answered by applebeer 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i think its wonderful and briliant and did you relly make it up yourself
2007-09-02 02:12:25 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
WOW! NICELY DONE. I ADMIRE YOU FOR BEING THIS OPEN. LOVE BACK AT YOU.
2007-08-31 19:53:15 · answer #6 · answered by GENE 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
not bad,keep at it
2007-08-31 19:45:35 · answer #7 · answered by notsohardtofigure 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋