Old 4 walls written by Aj montana Pop/dance/rock
2007-08-31 12:59:01 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
sitting in my bedroom dreaming 4 a better day in my old 4 walls i look upon room and sitting in my closet lookin 4 a better day i'm sitting my bed room lookin 4 a better life
2007-08-31 13:00:10 · update #1
that is the the first part of the song
2007-08-31 13:00:31 · update #2
not very good is it
2007-09-07 20:12:04 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
How are you sitting in your bedroom looking for a better life? You have to get up and go OUT to find the opportunity.
2007-09-08 14:22:43 · answer #2 · answered by ~*LilDebbie=BigDeborah*~ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I need to read more of the lyrics.
And put more feeling to it...
you just giving spacial information, about the 4 walls
add some meaning, etc.
Of course if you show me the other part of the song...i think just the way it is would make sense... :)
Good luck, keep working on ur song!
2007-09-02 09:59:04 · answer #3 · answered by ♥becauseisme♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think its great! id love to hear more. it makes sense too me i dont know what some other peple are saying! the name is very good try working on some more emotion! very good though! hope to see it in the charts!
2007-09-08 18:48:34 · answer #4 · answered by happytohelp 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds like someone is on restriction
2007-09-08 06:46:24 · answer #5 · answered by cheri h 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you suck go back to the septic tank you climed out of
2007-09-08 13:56:15 · answer #6 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
;-`{} "N`'O`.o`,e; STOpPp!! Pah,'LeEezZz`e.`... I hope you feel good about making my ears bleed !?! ;-`{ uh'mm try somethin ElSe!! lol `'R"r`r.r'r,rr...
2007-09-08 19:38:47 · answer #7 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its cool
2007-08-31 20:48:02 · answer #8 · answered by Shaq Diesel 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
okay
2007-09-08 17:26:13 · answer #9 · answered by Dave-O Tacoboy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋