to a person that never existed and feels the pain of his absence.........to you I write these words :
I miss U so much, more than you can imagine
More than my words can describe,
More than my emotions can show.
I miss your hugs and tender touch,
I miss our plays, our laughs and our "Naughty" days that never come.
I miss your advice, your protection and your cuddles,
I miss you badly more than you could imagine.
I searched for you in everyone,
But still couldn't be satisfied from anyone,
For to play a one's role is a terrible failure!!
I miss you so much than words can describe,
"My Brother"........that never existed,
~~~Kisses & Hugs ~~~ to you my impossible dream and lovely Brother.
if you like it please star it plz......and give me a rate out of 10.
thanks in advance to all who'll answer :-)
2007-08-31 07:53:24 · 23 answers · asked by Anonymous in Travel ➔ Africa & Middle East ➔ Egypt
to all :
thanks on your so kind, sincere and sweet answers..........they are amazing :)
by the way, i mean the absence of rhyme ;-) ...........and really wished he were there for me :'(
but thanks to Allah, Noha, is more than enough to me......Wish Allah protect her and save her from all evils, as well as you all...........Ameen ya rab al alameen.
2007-09-01 13:49:20 · update #1
Edit: @ Cool Muslim : thanks for your kind answer..........and yess ~~Noha~~ is my older sister :-)
2007-09-02 09:19:14 · update #2
4/10; sorry
the words are inappropriate and weak
2007-09-06 08:14:31 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 2⤋
Assallam mua alaikom.
Wow! It's great. Never expect U with such a potential and impressive hidden talent. Your words touch the readers heart.
Wassallam mu alaikom.
2007-09-01 06:13:50 · answer #2 · answered by atbt 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
20/10
it is very sweet , it really touched my heart , and the sweetest thing is that u talked from Ur heart and didn't care if it is similar or not or if the words r in place , this is how poetry should be, and i can see u a great writer in the future .
{{"" Best wishes""}}
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2007-08-31 09:16:16 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 0⤋
very sensitive & cute poem,really
i rate u by 10000000000000000000000000000000000 /10
here's a star,
may Allah make it up 2 u (not havin brother) by havin good faithful husband & beautiful samrt kids.
BTY :r u talkin about Noha,the 1 whp's with us here?
and if so is she really ur sis?
2007-09-02 09:08:16 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
This song is WOW
No one can type it but YOU
But I think No
Cuz you have the KO
Your Poem is the Cool like Frost
And soon you will Be the best
Wating for the rest
Yours Most1990
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2016-10-17 08:05:19 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
6/10, just to pass
2007-09-06 23:38:42 · answer #7 · answered by por w 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
for emotions 10/10, but there is no rhyme but who cares about the rhyme.
2007-08-31 08:04:08 · answer #8 · answered by بهي الطلعه 4 · 4⤊ 0⤋
Its very good good , and I would give you 9/10 and the reason for that is because there is no rhyme. Anyway it is good...
(In Australia we say Good on yea nada!!!!!!!)
2007-08-31 17:03:00 · answer #9 · answered by Heba A 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
"to a person that never existed and feels the pain of his absence"
tb mtbosy 7wleky wenty htla2y....lol
ok i liked your poem & starred it
2007-08-31 22:53:41 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
dearest , the loss isnt that big.
you can get over it through a good husband, a kind son, a loyal friend.
God shows you ways to get over what is missing in your life, IF YOU HAVE THE EYES TO SEE IT< THE EARS TO HEAR IT >AND THE SENSES TO ACKNOWLEDGE IT.
ask God to show you and you will soon feel that nothing is missing in your life.
2007-08-31 08:44:05 · answer #11 · answered by Moonrise 7 · 5⤊ 1⤋