The scars we share, the path we've taken,
the laughs we've forgotten, the choices left mistaken,
the reasons we smile, the guilt in our lies,
the lust on our lips, the look in our eyes,
the passion inside us, the sacrifice we've given,
the sexual smiles, the reason we're living...
Baby girl, say it one more time,
Will Your Eyes Still Shine At The End Of The Line?
(I just came up with these lyrics as I was typing them. What do you think?)
2007-08-30 18:14:06 · 7 answers · asked by Sky Guy 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
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STANDING Ovation !!
Great job !! ( ;
2007-08-31 03:43:47 · answer #1 · answered by iambettyboop 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
WOW
Go for it! Your eyes will someday
Bask in the light and start to shine
Turn your belief to go on
Do not give up the courage toward tomorrow
2007-08-31 01:22:37 · answer #2 · answered by Me 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
It seems like a relationship filled with euphoria and hope, but there is something unhealthy about it (guilt and lies, euphoric focus) which can be fixed.
2007-08-31 01:22:26 · answer #3 · answered by NY 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Wow...you must really have a gift! I couldn't do anything like that if I sat down and went at it for a week!
2007-08-31 18:08:43 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Fine.
2007-08-31 01:17:45 · answer #5 · answered by deepak d 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Needs a bit of work ( tweaking),but not bad. Really. Keep at it, and best wishes!
2007-08-31 02:11:26 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
good
2007-08-31 02:19:43 · answer #7 · answered by bigturkeyme 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋