Can you undestand this text? Please, to correct it for me!! I'm Brazilian English student. Thanks!!!?

Question

Recently, I could to know others countries like France, Italy and Spain. This tour through those places was very important to me because changed my impression and feeling about my country Brazil.
Now, I’m sure: Here is the best place to live. Brazil is the biggest mainland South America country. Else, I think that it is bigger than whole Europe (except Russia)
Our economics, compared with the rest of world is among the ten more developed countries. Our politics system is perfect but the politicians are very bad. Unfornately, someone work for theyself to work for our country instead.
The Brazilian people are very nice. They are formed to a lot of different races. Principaly the girls are beautiful
The change that have happened here and a think important is about Brazilian justice. Sometime ago I’ve seem on TV news the judicial proceedings to judgement of forty corrupts politicians. For me, this look like a enormous end very good change!!

Answer 1

Recently, I toured through other countries, like France, Italy, and Spain. The tour through those places was very important to me because it changed my impression and my feelings about the country where I live, Brazil.
Now, I'm sure Brazil is the best place to live. Brazil is the biggest mainland South American country. I also think that it is bigger than all of Europe, excluding Russia.
Our economics are among the top ten of all developed countries. Our political system is perfect, but our politicians are very bad. Unfortunately, some work for their own profit instead of their country's. (I think that is what you mean by that sentence).
The Brazilian people are very nice. They are a people of many races (once again, I think this is what you mean.). Generally, the Brazilian girls are very beautiful.
The change that happened here that I think is the best is the Brazilian justice. Some time ago, I saw on television news the judicial proceedings and judgement of forty corrupt politicians. To me, this is an enormous and very good change.

Answer 2

Recently, I got to know other countries like France, Italy and Spain. My tour through those places was very important to me because it changed my impression and feeling about my country Brazil.

Now, I’m sure: Brazil is the best place to live. Brazil is the biggest mainland South America country and I think that it is bigger than whole of Europe (except Russia)
Our economy, compared with the rest of world is among the ten most developed. Our political system is perfect but the politicians are very bad.

Unfortunately, it is better for someone to be self employed than to work in state employment.
The Brazilian people are very nice. They are made up of different races.

Principally the girls are beautiful.
The changes that have happened here and I think the most important is about Brazilian justice. Sometime ago I saw on TV news that there were judicial proceedings against forty corrupts politicians. For me, this looks like an enormous and good change.

Answer 3

Ela (horsejumper) tem razao, I would only change one thing. "Our economy is" em lugar de "Our economics are".

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