a poem for somone special
i woke up and had felt a change of heart life tore us apart so close yet so fat
desprate for ure touch as ure love flows through my blood
life without u is wasted well like an angel tht just fell
i will wait for the sight of u ill keep a stare on ure eyes
ure love brings me to life with a kiss on ure lips tht kiss will never end
and ill waste anothere day waiting for the kiss tht will free my soul and thn my heart will ache no more
i hope u like it
2007-08-28 23:35:07 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
it is a great poem
you are a great poet
and she is a great lucky girl, who is she?
2007-08-29 08:52:52 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like the concept, but there are many misspellings. Also, "textspeak" doesn't bother me when it's used to save time and money, but in poetry, you should spell out all the words and also check the spelling of the entire poem before you submit it. You are obviously a very sensitive person.
2007-08-28 23:41:59 · answer #2 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 2⤊ 1⤋
I liked this part: there is nothing left to say angel why wont u fly away i thought fixed ure broken wing then why be caged with me
2016-05-20 23:34:20 · answer #3 · answered by kathy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was so sweeeeeeeet. Thank you so much.
I loved the first line: "I woke up and had felt a change of heart life tore us apart so close yet so faT"
Just kidding. Ahahaha.
I loved it so much.
And I love you, too.
2007-08-28 23:38:12 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 2⤋
thats beautiful! ur a good poet! whos the poem for mohammad?? lolz..u messed up in the first line..u said yet so fat, didnt u mean yet so far?? lolz..if u said yet so fat, she'll get mad..lolz..correct that..good job!
2007-08-29 06:56:39 · answer #5 · answered by ♥~Paki_G1rL~♥ 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
oh what a poem she is lucky
my friend,
i like the poem very much
2007-08-29 01:35:56 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Aww that was sweet. It's a really nice poem.:)
Sounds like ur in love....:P
2007-08-28 23:55:53 · answer #7 · answered by tweetyfrog 3 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Nice one.
2007-08-28 23:44:06 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
its absolutely wonderful!! kya kavita hai!!...looks like youre in love!!
2007-08-28 23:46:16 · answer #9 · answered by ? 6 · 2⤊ 1⤋
yes i do like it...very nice !
2007-08-29 01:45:05 · answer #10 · answered by × 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋